Monday, 10 June 2019

   In a dark night. The rain was pouring as a busket.  On the highway the car was flying as a  wind.  In the car about in her middle forties woman who is trying to wipe her tears which are following on her sincere pale skin.  In her mind, a single question was  existent , whether I catch up or whether I can see him once more.  Being busy with these thoughts , She reached  the hospital . When she entered throught the door, her eyes fell down the doctor who was wearing  a white uniform .  Her first word was '  am  I on time ' . She was breathing very deep even doctor was able to listen to her  breathing. Doctar got a pause and said Unfortunately, Unfortunately , he has just passed away.  Indeed his final and last word was MARY.  The woman turned back Suddenly , without any words she started going out fast.  Doc asked what happened.  The woman whispered with shivering tone I am SUSAN.  

Retelling by B.N

14 comments:

  1. My dear, this story is a bit afraid, meaningful, and amazingly perfect.

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  2. is it a kind of joke? I love it

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    1. Actually It isn't joke. You can go on mentally.

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  3. Excellent story even I dont understant))) just kidding. I understant and loved it. zanks a lot

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  4. Great story. It is really worthwhile to read.

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  6. Did you create it yourself? You are ver creative👍

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  7. Coool Great my sister.

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  8. POOR SUSAN IT ISNT HONESTY FOR THEIR WOMEN I REALLY DONT LIKE THAT KINDA MEN WISH FROM GOD NOBODY HAVE THIZ KINDA MEN

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